Chap 5 pg 29

October 21st, 2011, 8:31 am

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Reply deepcheese, October 21st, 2011, 8:35 am

Random fact: In the original version of this story, this little robot girl had a much bigger role. Her job was to follow the group around an basically tell Adrian how awesome he was. She served no real point besides that, so I wrote her out of the story. But I decided to give her a little cameo. (Even if her personality is now totally different)

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Reply garym (Guest), October 22nd, 2011, 7:58 am

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Reply wulfbooy (Guest), October 22nd, 2011, 9:11 pm

cool you got good series, the robot is a cool twist. personally i like your first original thought better, but itll be interesting to see what happens from here.

Reply Eirikr (Guest), October 26th, 2011, 11:45 pm

In the last panel, it should be "activating" not "activateing". The e doesn't need to be there.

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