chap 4 pg 17

June 22nd, 2011, 7:45 am

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Reply Omega001, June 22nd, 2011, 2:35 pm

Okay, I see a resemblance to two people here and I don't mean Adrain and his sis, yet I'm not sure they are who I think they are, and I don't want to ruin it.

Reply Guest, June 22nd, 2011, 2:44 pm

add a "t" to though in last panel

Reply Guest, June 23rd, 2011, 11:34 am

Oh god, i missed quite some pages.
To what happened since Adrian woke up:

Wow! Your art is really really improving aaaaallll the time. I like your shading a lot, as well as the fact that the faces get smoother and smoother. The backgrounds are nice too. The only thing you might want to work on are the head-body-propositions, your heads are sometimes too big (As with this new character who just showed up). I love your way of pacing in the panels by the way, its great to read. One thing i noticed: You could make another crimp in the middle under the breasts to emphasize them. Just an idea.

To the story: Interesting! Can't wait what happens next ^-^


Reply sakurasaki92, July 6th, 2011, 1:42 pm


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